कुछ अश्क़...


कुछ अश्क़ बहे यहाँ आने से पहले...
कुछ बहेंगे यहाँ से जाने के बाद...
उन अश्को में समाया था डर,
इन पर होगा यादों का ताज...
डर था,
इस दुनिया में आने का, इसे जानने का, समझने का
इसे पहचानने का...
और यादें रह जांएँगी
उन रिश्तों की,
जो जाने-अन्जाने बस यूँ ही बन जाते हैं
और अपनी प्यारी-सी महक अपने पीछे छोड़ जाते हैं...

10 comments:

  1. बहुत ही भावपूर्ण निशब्द कर देने वाली रचना . गहरे भाव.

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  2. एहसास की यह अभिव्यक्ति बहुत खूब

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  3. sorry pooja...
    but that seemed pathetic..b'cos:-
    1. pic is horrific...bring in some innocence plz..
    2. how cand u b scared of coming to this life...this world..u r not an alien coming 4m some other world..
    u r in the subconscious, no thoughts plz..
    3. u r se-sawing with the emotions...give the emotion some time..to b felt...
    from fear to sorrrow to mithi yaaden ..u cant keep hopping on every line...
    4.u have to get involved into ur creation..then only it will shine like a pearl..feel it...!

    again.... i mus say dont b annoyed..
    i m a much worse writer.

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  4. @sanjay... thank you so much
    @raven... thank you so much for telling me honestly all that you felt... next, I written all this just about the birth-time and then regarding life-time, relations we make in this life and their impotance and feeling when when you have to leave them cause of any reason... about pic, whatever I thought while writing this poem I think this pic suits the best... its about the world as sea and you just a tear-drop... and most importantly, we not only cry whenever we are sad but at most happiest time also... ex.- at the time of baby's birth, both mother and child use to cry but there is a sort of difference... but at last thak you once again for the honesty... I need it always...

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  5. well xplained..
    that brings in a lot of sense and better understanding...
    Happy poeting!

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  6. @raven... thank you so much for appreciation...

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  7. कल 05/09/2011 को आपकी यह पोस्ट नयी पुरानी हलचल पर लिंक की जा रही हैं.आपके सुझावों का स्वागत है .
    धन्यवाद!

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  8. बहुत ही अच्‍छी प्रस्‍तुति ।

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  9. thank you so much Yashwant ji n Sada ji... always need such appreciation... n wish to get always... :)

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  10. क्या खुबसूरत एहसास... वाह...!
    सादर बधाई...

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